The umbrella Killer

Miho wrote this, and i think its great. I’ve just put the first part of it.

Killing is like falling in love,

It’s always with someone special…

 

Him

 

It was a stormy afternoon. The clouds were grey, causing the sky to be dark as night.

He watched her struggle through the storm.

He waited.

He cleared his throat.

“Would you like an umbrella miss?”

She smiled not suspecting the things going through his mind.

“Yes please!”

Her last words

 

Mary Jane

 

She sat at her window observing the view, it was raining, the street outside was empty. There were no people except for the young woman getting soaked. Behind her an old man with a limp followed. Was he her father? No she showed no acknowledgment of knowing he existed, to her he must have been just another figure in the rain. Mary Jane wondered what he was doing, and froze.

 

Her body went rigid; her blood ran cold as ice making goose pimples stick out on her arms. That face, that horrible deranged face, the evil one that she had to see when she closed her eyes the one that brought back memories that Mary Jane wanted to forget forever, those cold, dead eyes that lit up with fire from the very depths of hell.

 

It was him. Mary Jane’s eye’s lit up with fear. Fear raw and fresh oozing all over her, wave upon wave of it hit her inside. Her brain began to pump, her blood pressure soared, her heart rate began rising rapidly up to such dangerous heights. All the monitoring machines began to beep excitedly. She twitched dangerously frothing at the mouth, screaming on the inside. Her eye’s rolled backward as she trembled and shook. A doctor and two nurses ran in, grabbing her arms. “Inject her!” the doctor roared. The syringe plunged, and the needle entered. Mary Jane stopped dead, her eyes closed alarmingly; her body went slack her face went blank and expressionless. She slid silently into a deep sleep. But still her fear was there, and you could tell she was dreaming about him. How awful were those dreams? Let me put it this way, nightmare is an understatement.