The umbrella Killer

Miho wrote this, and i think its great. I’ve just put the first part of it.

Killing is like falling in love,

It’s always with someone special…

 

Him

 

It was a stormy afternoon. The clouds were grey, causing the sky to be dark as night.

He watched her struggle through the storm.

He waited.

He cleared his throat.

“Would you like an umbrella miss?”

She smiled not suspecting the things going through his mind.

“Yes please!”

Her last words

 

Mary Jane

 

She sat at her window observing the view, it was raining, the street outside was empty. There were no people except for the young woman getting soaked. Behind her an old man with a limp followed. Was he her father? No she showed no acknowledgment of knowing he existed, to her he must have been just another figure in the rain. Mary Jane wondered what he was doing, and froze.

 

Her body went rigid; her blood ran cold as ice making goose pimples stick out on her arms. That face, that horrible deranged face, the evil one that she had to see when she closed her eyes the one that brought back memories that Mary Jane wanted to forget forever, those cold, dead eyes that lit up with fire from the very depths of hell.

 

It was him. Mary Jane’s eye’s lit up with fear. Fear raw and fresh oozing all over her, wave upon wave of it hit her inside. Her brain began to pump, her blood pressure soared, her heart rate began rising rapidly up to such dangerous heights. All the monitoring machines began to beep excitedly. She twitched dangerously frothing at the mouth, screaming on the inside. Her eye’s rolled backward as she trembled and shook. A doctor and two nurses ran in, grabbing her arms. “Inject her!” the doctor roared. The syringe plunged, and the needle entered. Mary Jane stopped dead, her eyes closed alarmingly; her body went slack her face went blank and expressionless. She slid silently into a deep sleep. But still her fear was there, and you could tell she was dreaming about him. How awful were those dreams? Let me put it this way, nightmare is an understatement.

 

The Pig Scrolls, By Paul Shipton

 
OK the world is going to chaos, so what do you do? Well you don’t recruit a talking smarty pants pig, a junior assistant, assistant pythia in training and well…bumscruff as your first choices for heroes do you? Well in The Pig Scrolls it comes down just to that. Yep the whole story is told from Gryllus’s point of view. Err did I mention Gryllus is the talking pig? Yeah you probably were expecting that but I’d definitely rate this book 8/10 because it’s told with good humour, accurate Greek history and is an original and interesting book and overall just really good. Oh yeah you might want to buy it to find out whether we are trapped forever in eternal chaos or not. Yeah that’s just one of those things I thought you might just want to know.
 

Ryans Brain, A Jiggy Mcue story by Micheal Lawrence

 

Jiggy barely just got out of his last mishap but he’s gone headfirst and landed himself into another one, taking his 2 best mates and fellow musketeers Angie and Pete with him. This time strange things are happening to Jiggy, like herds of horses stampeding after him and lemon meringue pie throwing itself mysteriously out of his hands and onto the head’s of his teachers. All after his arch nemesis Bry-Ry put himself into a coma trying to put Jiggy into a coma. Are all these strange happenings connected? Or is it coming from a source that the 3 musketeers hadn’t considered? Just go read it because you wont find out from this review.

 

This review was written by Miho. More of her reviews can soon be found in her category.